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Karyn ReedFinal Report Part 1 – OutlineDirections: For Part 1, you are required to write a complete introductory paragraph using the outline below. For the second, third, and fourth paragraphs, you need to write complete sentences that show the basic outline for the essay. By completing this outline, you will have a guide to refer to when finalizing your report in Parts 2.Introductory Paragraph (Identify the thesis statement and write a complete paragraph explaining the topic in general.)Thesis Sentence: Paragraph: Fish cultivating is a late action in numerous parts of the world. Fish is anare imperative sustenancean important source of protein in the weight control plans of numerous individuals.This is increase the desire for fish. Wild fish exist actually in the immeasurable of the wild waters. The two joined contribute towards both the common and the simulated amphibian life. With this, the role of aquaculture in food production, economic development, and food security is increasingly becoming important in the world today to meet fish demand(Wallace 516). From the prior, aquaculture holds guarantee to give a developing human populace with sustenance the same number of the world's catch fisheries have achieved their natural points of confinement of creation or have been exhausted through overfishing and living space annihilationextinction?. Cultivated fish and wild caught fish have a progression of critical effects on human life in this manner, the need to examine both the correlation and complexities between wild fish and cultivated fish are important but aquiculture has more advantages. (see how you need to make it clear what side you are focusing on?)Paragraph 2: Position (Write a topic sentence that supports your thesis and provides a transition between the paragraphs. Then, record at least three details that provide support for the topic sentence.) Topic Sentence: Fish farming is considered as one of the principal aspects of aquaculture.Note you will need 3 difference sources to back up your claims for this paragraph that farmed fish is betterDetail A: Farmed fish entails raising fish for either domestic or commercial purposes so it helps the economyDetail B: Aquaculture entails two forms-extensive or intensive aquaculture ? how is this a point it seems like definition better suited for the introduction. Detail C: Extensive mainly done locally; intensive entail supplementing fish with external produced foods-moveto introduction you need a reason to support aquiculture here Paragraph 3: Opposition (To present a fair argument you need to research and outline some of the common positions that dispute your position (i.e. if you are for chocolate for your position, here you would be writing why chocolate is bad). Write a topic sentence that supports your thesis and provides a transition between the paragraphs. Then, record at least three details that provide support for the topic sentence.)Topic Sentence: The only down side is that wild caught fish tend to cost 3-4 times more than farmed fish (Skåre et al 264).? Here you need to talk about the benefits of wild caught this seems to be a problem to point out in the rebuttalDetail A: Wild fish needs modified capturing processes purse seining, trawling, long line drifting are some of the methods to catch wild fish which is a problem because….move to rebuttalWild caught fish can have higher levels of omegasDetail B: purse seining, trawling, long line drifting are some of the methods to catch wild fish Another benefit of wild caught fish are…Detail C: resources needed are vast; mainly done by companies with vast source of money ?You need another benefits hereParagraph 4: Rebuttal (In the final paragraph you will make a case as to why your position is correct versus the opposing position. Essentially, you will defend your side of the argument using examples and evidence to discount the opposition. Write a topic sentence that supports your thesis and provides a transition between the paragraphs. Then, record at least three details that provide support for the topic sentence.)Topic Sentence: Farmed fish are harvested via a series of a few methods unlike wild fish.Here you need to attack the points for the oppositions, not sure which point you are attacking hereDetail A: harvested fish are preserved through various methods this does not seem to be helpng your argument just defining itDetail B: farmed fish have promoted fish eating cultures in many communities worldwide Detail C: farmed fish has become source of income for many causing better economy thus starting end to poverty Conclusion: (Record a concluding sentence below. This should be your thesis restated in different words.) Concluding Sentence: Due to the correlation andand the complexities between wild fish and farmed fish, there has been a progression of critical effects on human lifeshow that farmed fish will be the preferred method in the future..References sources look to be a good start but not seeing where they are being used yet. Wallace, I. S., et al. "A survey of wild marine fish identifies a potential origin of an outbreak of viral hemorrhagic septicemia in wrasse, Labridae, used as cleaner fish on marine Atlantic salmon, Salmo salar L., farms." Journal of fish diseases 38.6 (2015): 515-521.Samuelsen, Ole B., et al. "Distribution and persistence of the anti-sea-lice drug teflubenzuron in wild fauna and sediments around a salmon farm, following a standard treatment." Science of the Total Environment 508 (2015): 115-121.Skåre, Janneche Utne, et al. "Benefit-risk assessment of fish and fish products in the Norwegian diet: An update." Eur. J. Nutr. Food Saf 5 (2015): 260-266.
Farmed fish vs. Wild fish

Farmed fish vs. Wild fish

Question # 00399750 Posted By: sunbeam2014 Updated on: 10/04/2016 08:14 PM Due on: 10/14/2016
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The attachment is my outline with the teacher's notes.

Final Report: Part 2

Using the work you completed in Part 1, write your final research report, which
should be a minimum of 1,000-1,250-words.

Create your conclusion paragraph using your final report outline. Make revisions based on any feedback, comments and/or proofreading you received in the final report outline related to this section.

Remember to support your data and information with appropriate citations.

A minimum of six peer-reviewed references must be included. These include the resources from Part 1.

Prepare this assignment according to the guidelines found in the GCU Style Guide,
located in the Student Success Center.

This assignment uses a grading rubric. Instructors will be using the rubric to grade
the assignment; therefore, students should review the rubric prior to beginning
the assignment to become familiar with the assignment criteria and expectations
for successful completion of the assignment.

You are required to submit this assignment to Turnitin. Refer to the directions in the Student Success Center. Only Word documents can be submitted to Turnitin.

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