ENG110 Unit 7 Discussion

Unit 7 DB: Your Revision Process (ENG110)

Revision is an important part of the writing process. Once you have a draft of your essay, you can then begin editing and revising. When you revise, you might add more details, remove unnecessary words, or fix the run-on sentences. These are just a few examples of how you can revise your work.

Initial Response: For your initial post, please select one part of your essay that you are currently working on that you think needs to be revised. Share 3–5 sentences from that part of your essay in this discussion. Your classmates will offer suggestions on how to revise this selection. Please consider the below bullet points when you create your initial post:

• Why did you pick this part of your essay to revise?
• What did you like about the selection you are sharing?
• Finally, ask one question about the revision of this part of your essay that you would like the class and your instructor to answer.