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Eng101 - 2. Ryan Demoss DATE @ d MMMM yyyy 6 March 2016 Another Ppoint of Social media Andreas Kaplan and Michael Haenlein define sSocial media depend on mobile and web-based technologies to create highly interactive platforms through which individuals and communities share, co-create, discuss, and modify user-generated content. They introduce substantial and pervasive changes to communication between organizations, communities, and individuals. Social media differs from traditional/industrial media in many ways, including quality reach, frequency, usability, immediacy, and permanence. There are many effects on that stem from internet usage. However, such as Facebook, Instatgram, and Twitter haves been limiteding societys social skills over a period of ten or more years, because it has given people a false confidence, unrealistic expectations of relationships, and people dont know how to act with people face-to-face and deal with body language and intimate situations because they are behind a screen. Before we had social media, we gained our confidence from standing up to people, and actually facing our problems face-to-face. Facebook, which was created by Mark Zuckerberg at the age of 18. It is only one of the few types of social media which teens, housewives and just about any adult lock log in to either chat online or play games online. This group of people turns out to be social media addicts, spending hours upon hours of their days online. This results to a breakdown of the family values and communicating skills. It also results to lost leadership. However, teens are the main source of addiction, and this can take up to 8 hours a day. They are spending too much time on social media because they are chatting with their friends and searching for unnecessary people which prevents them from studying. Even lowering their grades. Teens like to socialize with through social media, instead of playing sports and getting outdoor exercise, which means that they are getting unhealthy. There are great concern about these chats on the social media leading to negative self esteem, leading depression and subsequently, even suicides amongst teens. As we approach current social media has been very advantageous communicating tool for people of all ages to use. However behind closed doors social media is exterminating the social skills of the younger generation. It cause teenagers have increased aggression in their lack of empathy, which increases the possibility of depression and low priority. Through In the research paper A Review of Facebook Research in the Social Sciences, by Robert E. Wilson claims, most teenagers and people said that they cant imagine a world without social media and an astounding 96 of people have at one point signed up to one of these sites. At these days psychologists newly discovered syndrome called FOMO FOMO syndrome is the fear somebody feel that he will miss out on something huge if he dont do something/participate in an event. FOMO (Fear of missing out) syndrome has come hand in hand with the social media craze, which is the Fear of Missing out. It is especially strong for those who are hooked on social media. This syndrome means that people are can become glued onto their social media sites constantly refreshing the pages because they are so afraid of missing out on something important or interesting. Following the forum Beware the Dangers of FOMO written by Linda saying, FOMO syndrome is the bad result of internet. She also emphasis correct direction of social media. Currently the biggest problem with Social Media is Cyberbullying. This is not your average school bullying in the sense it can be controlled by people, on social networking sites bullies dont get told off by anyone or restricted by anyone and can continue as they see fit. Another difficulty with online bullying is that the attacker can hide behind their computer and are shadowed by this. A lot ofMany people would not have the courage to say things in person to one another but on Facebook people seem to be more outgoing and some completely have a change of personality and become a lot more confident. Facebook has affected the social life and activity of people in various ways. With its availability on many mobile devices, Facebook allows users to continuously stay in touch with friends, relatives and other acquaintances wherever they are in the world, as long as there is access to the Internet. I agree social media is good, but the younger generation needs to take this form of social media serious and follow ethical guidelines on how to use it there life. Im against social media should not be used to be overly benefited, commit a crime, misrepresent, invade privacy unwarranted, and bullies users. Work cited A Review of Facebook Research in the Social Sciences by Robert E. Wilson, Beware the Dangers of FOMO written by Linda Social psychology written by HYPERLINK http//psychology.about.com/od/profilesal/p/gordon-allport.htm Gordon Allport, EssayRubricEnglish10110101010TotalContentClear call to actionClaim has a clear What and WhyContent is effective and does not incorporate any fallacies and does not rely on questionsClear use of either the Traditional or Rogerian argumentTry to be more specific with what the rules and guidelines are and how they could be taught and followed.X Overgeneralizing, assuming, and other fallacies. 30OrganizationName, prof, class and date in upper left Suitable Title MLA Guidelines Throughout Paper Or other formatting issues.One inch margins, last name and page number in upper right cornerClear topic sentencesEffective essay layout and Smooth TransitionsX Margins need to be 1 on all sidesX Work on transitions and flow20SourcesOne literary sourceSecond literary sourceThird Literary sourceSources are thoroughly analyzed, and sources are not just dropped into essay (use quote sandwiches)X Need to use quotation marks if you borrow direct words30ElementsTopic is original and has a unique angleWord choice suits audienceAppropriate tone and formality for subject and audienceWorks Cited PageX Does not contain correct information and is not formatted correctly30Grammar, Mechanics, SpellingNo or few spelling errorsNo subject/verb agreement issues No tense IssuesNo run-on sentences or comma splices. Semi-colons, colons, dashes, and hyphens are used correctly.Clear sentence construction (no misplaced modifiers, vague pronouns, or weak words, and commas are used correctly with subordinate clauses)X Many confusing sentence constructions and word choice issues.X20Total 200130 Seongchan O Indent first sentence of each paragraph Word Choice Issue Use quotation marks if you take words directly from a source. Avoid / in formal essays Which society Vague Pronoun -- Who or what are you referring to Try to reword without this word. Not parallel. Avoid OUR WE US YOU -- Try to clarify who youre really referring to before considering such usage. Avoid OUR WE US YOU -- Try to clarify who youre really referring to before considering such usage. False dilemmajust because we are behind screens doesnt mean we cant still stand up to people and gain confidence. Fragment. Dont overgeneralize. You just said everyone is an addict. Avoid just using THIS or THAT. Be clear and concise by saying exactly what you mean. Source Who decides what is too much Fragment Overgeneralizing. Not necessarily. Maybe someone plays too many sports and never learns to read. Sports do not equal healthy. Avoid OUR WE US YOU -- Try to clarify who youre really referring to before considering such usage. Which usually gets a comma before it because it tends to offset non-essential information. That tends not to get a comma because it provide essential information. Do you need quotation marks Kind of a shift in ideas. New paragraph and topic sentence What Vague Pronoun -- Who or what are you referring to Try to reword without this word. Work on transitions. Says who Dont assume. No caps needed Avoid using THINGS SOMETHING ANYTHING Avoid self-reflection. 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