Integrating feedback is an important part of the writing process

 Integrating feedback is an important part of the writing process. Through feedback, writers facilitate a conversation where they provide encouragement and suggestions on their colleagues’ work. For this Assignment, you begin an ongoing dialogue with your Instructor regarding the feedback you have received on your writing. Recording feedback in a journal also allows you to track progress, celebrate successes, and keep tips and recommended resources handy.  

TEACHER FEEDBACK WAS:  COLLAPSE

Thanks for the intro, 

The definition you have is fine, as it stems from the reading material.  What might be your definition as phrased in your own terms?  Also, maybe be specific: if scholarly writing is equivalent to academic writing, what does that (academic writing) mean?  What are the key components of scholarly/academic writing? 

Also, make sure to address the final part of the discussion question!